He’ll negotiate the curves
tires squealing in the heat
Until her engine roars
and she takes the driver’s seat
art: nuit d’été by Christophe Kro
Negotiate
a decathexis deconstruction by a.d.matthias
a decathexis deconstruction by a.d.matthias
He’ll negotiate the curves
tires squealing in the heat
Until her engine roars
and she takes the driver’s seat
art: nuit d’été by Christophe Kro
Oh my! This is brilliant! 🤗
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Thank you, I’m glad you like it (: It’s pretty cliché, I think, though
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But I really loved it. 🤗
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Then I’m very grateful, thank you
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My pleasure! 🤗
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That’s hot…
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😊
I thought about adding more like:
The only way to win the race
is not to go around fast
Instead the rule to come in first
is to see who comes in last
😕
But it already felt pretty gratuitous 🙄
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Bahahahahaha
You should’ve just gone for it… why not?
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It just felt like too much, to me. Like it would have pushed already borderline pandering into joke/pun/gag territory. Felt like simple was the way to go 😔
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I see what you mean… the way you have it is good. 😁
I always push for the joke if there is one to push for… but that’s because I like to deflect lol
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